In the Halo 3 part, put a couple of examples of the new Flood forms.

And of a mention of the Flood in the novel Halo: Ghosts of Onyx.

You should put a quick mention of the Flood in the Halo 2 subsection when it infected the heretic faculty.

I only understood it as I have played Halo.

The second paragraph of the section Appearances, subsection Halo: Combat Evolved is a bit confusing.

Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 20:36, 16 July 2008 (UTC)Ĭomments - So far there's a good flow, although Wackymacs ( talk ~ edits) 19:51, 16 July 2008 (UTC) Fixed. instead of p., and it needs to comply with WP:DASH. Ref 1 needs 'p.' in front of page number, and ref 13 needs pp. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 18:00, 16 July 2008 (UTC) Almost there. I'm not sure if I can replace all the Cmdstore refs, but I can at least do one or two.

Minor prose issue: 'rather than something the player happens upon and shoots.' - happens upon? - Wackymacs ( talk ~ edits) 17:50, 16 July 2008 (UTC).

The merchandise, did it sell well? Also, when was each action figure released onto the market?

It would also be nice if you could add a little bit more detail to some points.

It would be nice if you could add 'p.' and 'pp.' appropriately before page numbers in the footnotes, to avoid any confusion.

It also looks like the prose has been improved since the last FAC, but there might be minor stylistic things I have missed.

Instead, use this format: 'Nylund (2003).

When citing the same book more than once, there is no need to repeat the book title, publisher, ISBN and first author name.

My only concern with the references is as a source, as it is a commercial website.

This is referenced to reliable third party sources including most importantly several published books, MTV and GameSpot.

The article mentions cultural impact and development.

Concerns of comprehensiveness issues relating to criteria 1b in the first and second FAC nominations have been resolved from what I can see.

Weak Support - Ah, the Flood - I hated them when playing Halo 1! Couple of minor things, mostly good though: Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk) 15:15, 16 July 2008 (UTC) However, it has gone through peer review, been copyedited twice by me (although I admit I might have missed some minor things), and I added in three paragraphs of out-of-universe information, so I believe all the bases are covered. įlood (Halo) Nominator: - David Fuchs FAC 1, FAC 2 (18:32, 1 January 2008)Īrticle has failed last two FACs because of lack of responses, concerns about meeting WP:WAF, and own nominator ignorance. The article was promoted by User:SandyGeorgia 20:35, 23 July 2008. No further edits should be made to this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination.

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